I’m having too much fun completely re-writing this book. Should revisions be fun?
Slightly different names, timelines, inciting incidents, backstory. Still a big, messy space opera romance. Still familiar to the 1500 – 2000 of you who read the first one, but hopefully much better.
The new first line of the new Chapter 1 (subject to change, of course):
Fourteen hundred spectators watched Jason Kee-DaSilva, the Leopard of Saba, ruin his career two minutes after his comeback victory.
(Digital sketch after this article on Muay Thai.)